One interesting thing I’ve noticed when I go through Sunlight is how many scenes that ends with one character rushing away, leaving more or less upset.
Quite ridiculous when you start to see it.
You don’t need to guess twice in what I’ve been deleting lately. That’s right. That last line in every scene. It really doesn’t add anything. On the contrary.
In one case it was even completely obvious that the character leaving, would never do that, because the other character was on her turf and she would not just hurry away because they had a disagreement. Not when she was where she belonged and he was the stranger, and of course the bad guy.
I think I should save those running off stage to where it is really important. It is no good way to have it as a standard. What on Earth would that look like?