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Thursday, January 29, 2009





"Boy you really are getting better at this sort of stuff aren’t you?"

I blinked. That what it said, the comment, written in the margin of my first draft.

We have read eachother's efforts for years now. I don't know how much we would know the other in real life if we ever meet, but we sure know the other's writing.

"Boy you really are getting better at this sort of stuff aren’t you?"

I just want to go home early and enjoy life with a cup of hot chocolate.

6 comments:

Lori said...

That's some pretty excellent feedback!

I would've probably said "Wait - how bad was I before?" LOL But then again, I worry the sun coming up sometimes.

Désirée said...

Hi Lori. Look at it positive :-)
My writing has been horrible. I'm happy I'm making progress.

This Makes My Day said...

This comment is of great help and support, it's good to receive this kind of support and positive vibrations on your path. I hope you enjoyed your hot chocolate my friend, you deserved it.
You see: there are important and positive road signs too!

Désirée said...

Yes, it felt great. I want to see more of those road signs.

Robert A Vollrath said...

Its good to have positive feedback.

I think screenplays are the hardest form of writing as every word must work.

Désirée said...

I think poems are much harder :-)

But screenplays are special since they have so many "rules" and are basicly only blueprints.

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